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shiznit 06-26-03 09:55 PM

thats the reason....why picture paints a thousand words....i think thats it...LOL

different views and intellectual minds like combined into one...

awesome!

Dadi Kewl 06-27-03 06:25 AM

^werd^

all the pieces are good and no-ones
freeposted or been fucking around.

I might take mine and put it in a thread on the
actual poetic scritures, see what feedback i get

Pz All

-one love-

varentao 06-27-03 07:29 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by AddLibb
^werd^

all the pieces are good and no-ones
freeposted or been fucking around.

I might take mine and put it in a thread on the
actual poetic scritures, see what feedback i get

Pz All

-one love-


That's a good idea.

shiznit 06-27-03 03:36 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Content Flowz


are you going to place more pictures up ?




Im trying to dig up some shit to put up a fairly interesting picture...

but yeah flowz...we gonna put on some more...


its nice to know that ppl to appreciates art so much....i mean whenever i read like their views on how they look at a certain abstract picture...it just showed me how very talented rb poets we have here....so much respect...


but yeah ill try to put up another one in a couple of days...

keep em droppin people...i wanna read more!

BabyGurl68 06-28-03 03:18 AM

i sing of drunken nights,
reminisin fights, stars glare at me so bright i struggle tryn 2 find tha lite,
all tha the promises spoken, thinkin bouta small seed, logan, but still you proceed to leave me, is that right?, you tell me you love me, but not by a long sight
broken memories, outspoken shattered dreams, i cant believe that one midsummers eve could make me grieve, never thougth ud just up n leave, after what YOUve concieved, how the hell was i ever so nieve to put myself in this obligation, you told me you loved me i believed so true, i spread my legs, 10 mins, it was throu, come to find tha protection didnt do what its supposed to, your affection, put me in direction to expect an i do, and a month n a half later mi belly grew, now your rejection, gave me a change of direction got me thinkin what the fuck am i gonna do, my life misconstrue, because your so untrue, you swore nothign less than the real mccoy, but now you got me askin are you a real man or just a boi?

Legendary 06-28-03 12:46 PM

I kneel down before you with nothing but respect
Although I have faith, I don't expect to hear your voice during our dialects
Please just give me a listening ear
And help me deal with what I viscously fear
I try my hardest to put distractions below me
But some continue to linger and keep floating
I have all these questions and I hope you'll teach
Sometimes I feel like the answer's just out of my reach
I know you're watching over me while I seek for peace
So forgive me when I sin and forget to cease

Tutti 06-29-03 02:19 AM

Wondering, Wondering the world in me.
I been my knees imagining i be.
The things i imagine float to the bottom.
What things mean i can't call em.
My mind is filled with the word is.
Is the question i'm asking relating to me.
Wondering,wondering the world in me. By:Jasmine

CrazyE 06-29-03 02:34 PM

My hands are bound with questions
On my knees I seek redemption
from the spoils and toils of modern life
I am immune to decison and cursed with spite

Music is the monofilament of my soul
From it I reach out to other worlds
With it I mend my inner wounds
I can speak out , be loud , and walk alone

Behind me out of site , lies my past
infront of me is the unknown, an open vast
I challenge the heavens to show me the light
I accept the consenquence of my chosen plight

shiznit 06-30-03 01:31 AM

wow....incredible people...

these were some pretty interesting, educational, emotional masterpieces right there...

every words, lines, syllables, line breaks, rhyme schemes that were used are fantastic...all magnificent stuff from our own rb poets...much respect..

SugarFree 07-06-03 07:15 PM

The world so dark
But I have no Fear
I do nothing but question
Yet the answers are near
Around me in the Crazy world
Are the answers that I long to hear
Beside me, yet Hidden
But theyve always been there

shiznit 07-06-03 08:40 PM

this is simple and it wasnt bad at all...but u might wanna reconsider posting on Week III...thanks!


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