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i wasnt feeling this all that much, that first line was kinnd of a down...protect your chest with a vest?...thats so new-bish [word or not a word...that is the question] that i kind of sounded like a dying cat...by that i mean i was very upset....ya need to elevate
A2Z |
Fair enuff dawg but could u do better ?
Uppin |
Uppin this for feedback dawgs.
Peace |
this was alright...why should everyone flow the same..poems are raps as well you just gotta catch the flow...its structured that way for a reason mi hombre..this was alright..peace
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