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filed 10-17-03 05:02 PM

thx for the reply girl, kinda weird that your girl was named tara as me too, go teras!! i agree with you no one should have to go thou it, but im greatfull all the same, seems like you and the father dont get along to well, same here, i havent talked to him in a good year or so, and i dont think i ever will again, if im lucky. thanks again for the reply!

~Tera~
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highlander 10-17-03 06:10 PM

one of the best ive ever read on the net.
skills displayed.
emotions in play.

peace

DaGyrlRemarqabL 10-17-03 08:37 PM

Hey Gyrl...
Youre a great writer, beautiful piece here. The imagery was AMAZING. Very touching...I felt it on many levels..
Stay up fIled..
Pz

authenticity 10-17-03 09:13 PM

ur names tara???weird!!! yea the daddy and i dont get along... it was pretty much his fault my baby died....ok i g2g..bye and have a good day...

snapped 10-22-03 03:59 PM

WOW WOW WOW i agree this is one of the best ive read!! it was so pure and simple and heartfelt that it really touched me. im sorry bout you losing her and all, thats gotta be hard on someone. my love goes out to you and her! this here was just great not anyway else to put it

~my love~

filed 10-26-03 08:35 PM

thank you all so much for the feed back it means alot!!!!!!!!

~Tera~
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nunother 10-27-03 12:18 AM

I second everythin that was said above me....it was heavy wit emotions...i have not been in a situation remotely close to that, but you made me feel it...simple, but very very effective~ stay up~ good sh!t


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