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Irid won this nice punches, wordplay n flow the other kid came a bit light i was expectin more from him
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thugzdocry cause he had better punchez in my opininon...
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dis was a close battle i dont no who got this one i have to think about it for a min???????????????????????><>>>>>>>>>>>>><?<?><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
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irriducubilli
he took this one....Flow was a little off, it changed a lot in places. Punches were alright, I did enjoy reading them. Personals good. Wordplay was good, Work on it a little. Elevation, Join the rest of us. Thugzdocry you need to come up with more personals. You need to work on your punches. You had too many Elementary lines. A little Elevation on everything and you'll have it. Just Work on it Kid. Payce... Vote-irriducubilli |
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