uppin this holla front............................................. .................................................. ................................

verbal rapist had this in my opinion peep my battle at
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho..... ...........

i seen no effort in Feirce's verse whatsoever
i give this to verbal for his attempt to win............................................... ...........................................

Aight, Verbal Rapist, U Got This As U Would Have Thought

Better Flow And Structure, Big Time
Better Punches N Well Thought Shit, Nice Stuff In There

Both of you, just needa work on uppin ya vocabs, way ta do that, keep droppin ya shit, verbal u not as much, u almost there man, keep it up

Shadow, u needa work on ur structure, and ur flow, aka. its gotta roll smoothly. Try gettin sum more complexity in ya pieces as well

Good Job Both Of Ya

VERBAL GETS POLL VOTE

Hit dis up dawg, bit of a merkin on the cat by me but oh well, a fair vote is needed

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8899#post608899

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VR gets my Vote. Fierce Shadow didn't rythme at certain times and VR had better Flow and Punches. Nothing Spectacular , but he got the JOB done , and sometimes thats all you need to do around here. Also FS , if your gonna translate your verse for us , use Parenthesis , otherwise it looks like its part of ya rythme and it convolutes the verse.

VOTE - Verbal Rapist

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1

Need 1 vote , but an "Honest" one
Peace , CrazeE

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i agree with him^ and verbal here is a tip
stop uppin or you'll get disqualified....the max is 5 ups
aight...just tryin to save you
props to both
peace

good battle so fair u 2................................................. ................................

fair=far my fault............................................. .................................................. ........

i giv this 1 to verbalist ... shadow had no flow at all ......and if u got the time to get killed i wanna battle u shadow..!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>

nice...

verbal got this by wordplay
good effort 2 u both.............................................. ..................