Tell her to just keep a positive mind frame everthing will work out in the end. It will be hard at first but nothing last forever

this was nice....rhymes were symplistic...then again...it's hard to use large vocabulary when doing an emotional song...i liked this shit....show's what u went through....and how u pulled through it...yeah....real emotional....

BREAKDOWN
Multis - good
Vocab - ok
Metas - good
Emotion - excellent
RhymeScheme - excellent
Flow - very good (except for Yamagasea...lol...couldn't pronounce)
Overall - u had some nice emotional shit goin on here....i think if u would'a put more time into it...it would've come out much better....

Rating
8.5/10

peace
4:20

ill shit,i felt this drop fa real, emotion felt and over all well put down ya dig,well keep droppin tha real shit boo,~1~