i'll young if this was a freestyle battle this would have been great but it's text you've got a improve your wordplay
your best l.ine was Im ~comin-at-him~ like a ~live-landmine~ on ~enemy-lines~//
I'd ~knock-dis-kid-out~ witout even using my ~"punch"lines~//
to me



Gay fag, in fact you fudge pack till yo eye alignment is no longer intact/1
I reacte to yo last track and retract my hand back and proceed to slap this cat/2
The only way you progress in sex is yo drunk sister possessed to iscest/3
The slugs you catch yo dumb ass had to study for a blood test/4
I found you brain and smashed-it, as if there was more than a fragment to smash shit/5
If you had a chance you past-it, you couldn’t spit hot if you gargled with acid/6

that hole thing was flow well liked it better the ill younge
lol you won this but please improve yor stacture

i liked realest too icant vote yet, but if i couldi would vote for realest on this one
i did like lil young p verse though it was hot
yall keep spitten though

yo dumb ass had to study for a blood test......played out dawg.............................................. ..............................................

ok what about your shit payless shoes i have seen that shit in at least 11 different sites in 20 different ways including this one nigga so dont even talk about played come on now

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Originally posted by SouthernRapper
Vote-Lil Young P

damn i liked this battle.....but lil's flowed more and punches hit slightly harder....multies were good on both sides...

good battle...

same thing he said

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Originally posted by SouthernRapper
Vote-Lil Young P

damn i liked this battle.....but lil's flowed more and punches hit slightly harder....multies were good on both sides...

i agree with those kats// although this was very even and lil young prob didnt bring it his hardest he won this with better flow//

yo if u could plz hit my battle up with stealth eclipse

aight yo, i didnt know dat jawn wuz used before truthfully, but nice battle, and no beef.... <^><^><^><^><^><^>

My ~lyrical-electric-current~, straight ~blowin-dis-kids-fuse~//
Eh. thats a decent start
~Sink-his-ass-quick~ like da ~titanic~ on it's ~maiden-cruise~//
yeah thats aight, not difficult to think of though
Got dis kid ~scared-stutterin~, like he wuz a ~guest-speaker~//
LOL, NIce
His rymes is ~cheap-and-ugly~ like ~"payless-sneakers"~//
Not too good, Payless too common these days
Im ~comin-at-him~ like a ~live-landmine~ on ~enemy-lines~//
Eh. . . I suppose that could work
I'd ~knock-dis-kid-out~ witout even using my ~"punch"lines~//
You should've used YOUR punch lines
He like a ~stop-sign-on-a-highway~ he ~outta-his-place~//
Eh... Outta his place? But I get concept
Im like a ~lyrical-time-bomb~ and i'm ~blowin-up-in-his-face~//
Aight
He aint ~elevatin~...he must be ~stuck-in-my-ditch~//
Its an opener don't got to be good
Even ~CHIDDMATIC~ could ~murda-dis-bitch~//(and hes banned)
I dunno, ist that really good? Not really

Over all, not as good as realest, realest gets my vote

Gay fag, in fact you fudge pack till yo eye alignment is no longer intact/1
What? Nice Multi's though
I reacte to yo last track and retract my hand back and proceed to slap this cat/2
*react, *ya, Ehm not a punch but multi's are good, I like it
The only way you progress in sex is yo drunk sister possessed to iscest/3
possessed to incest? but I get concept
The slugs you catch yo dumb ass had to study for a blood test/4
slugs didn't belong but, played out line
I found you brain and smashed-it, as if there was more than a fragment to smash shit/5
Uh???? WHAT?
If you had a chance you past-it, you couldn’t spit hot if you gargled with acid/6
the acid rhymes with accentin I suppose, Good line, It might have been done but not usually
You follow direction you couldn’t jump hard if you was an erection/7
Couldn't jump hard? why would he want to jump hard?
I leave infection to add to yo collection of questions who you testen/8
Good multi but makes no sense, sounds hot though
I move in stealth cut off ya leg and attach it to my bealt/9
belt, no such thing as bealt. . . oh and thats dry
You gay as hell, you the only one I k now that start a ryme by talking to himself/10
lol, made me laugh and check his first line, thats good
I beat yo belief that you can beat me till it and you cease to breath/11
put an e after breath to make breathe, its a good line
All the bullshit you can keep, This nigga sucks more than a hoe with no teeth/12
LOL, thats good, creative, I like it
you are know to get stanked, Yo rymes have the content as a septic tank/13
Fucking DUMB ASSES its RHYME, silent H, KNOWN, put an N, line is good
Swell you lip like a ballpark frank, you mouth is equivilent to a sperm bank/14
[b]didn't know franks did that, thx for info, and sperm bank is ill, props for that
My thoughts is hectic try to test this, leave belly up like a dead fish/15
ok I see concept, its not that great but w/e
Skill I possess it, you don’t possess shit that’s y you will be on my reality-checked list/16
w/e, posesses would of been better with just possess

GJ you got my vote

Vote = realest

lil young p took dis betta punches im out holla props 2 both tho

peep mine
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5371#post615371

I think lil young p took this one. I liked the titanic line... plz check out my battles

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=64420
AND
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=63221