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EDIT IF U WANT
I WANT THIS TO BE FAIR :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: ::::::::: :: |
it dont let me////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
I wanted to get the vets out my way, but one is plenty// my idea of fun’s pluggin Brooklyn till the gun is empty// wanna tempt me?- ya Envy my best shit will be tested// I bless scripts, for eclectics ‘Craven’ horror stories like Wes’s// message in a bottle, that Molotov hittin ya windshield// clips peeled, fulfilled my Lust to see ya get killed// in my Greed, ya life’s cheap, ya corpse felt my aggress-sin//(aggression) waited till rigamortis set-in then gorged myself on dead skin// hungrily, ya lunch-to-me, Gluttony is my deadly-sin// I take it back in fact it was my Wrath that left ya head leak-in// Miks Spits are oxyogen!! when I breathe in and exhale// you got guts Brook- that’s past-tense since the absence of ya entrails// hate me, get angry, in a rematch I bleed cats from da past// ya obviously ain’t on-Brooklyn(on one) unlike a crack fiend that’s relapsed// Miks raps, offend evil, I end sequels, when I skin people// un-equaled, heat-filled, rated triple-X like Vin Diesel// been lethal since pre-school… so this skill is no surprise// sick as head colds… Brooklyn better learnda worD ILL IS now dEFINED/// ya flows are fake rap plaid out by vets an maks,thinkin u the best at dat/ ill merk dis cat thinkin hes hard i had it,his shit is retarded an is a dik rydin magnit/ my flows come savage to destroyin this vet this battles gunna turn out tragic i bet/ u go a million lines over the limit thinkin no one will notice but i did,so u wishin u didnt fold up// ud be better off if ya ass never showed up an get torn to peaces when my flows make ya blow up// ill end dis vets life quick wit da style unlike dis prick when hes boutz to be ripped to shreds// ill feel dis cat wit spits full of lead aimin strate at his head,an take ya mind out cuz its sa clone of mine// only way u winnin dis battle wit punches of mine an a bunch of used rhymes// ya flows are a fairy tale story,ill tear this cat a new but hole till its all gory.frontin to be a male// |
u actualy edited your verse?............ :S 'nuff said.
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uppin foreal..............honest votes cuz man i verse came harder..then most......an brokk luve to write stories......nice verse tho..
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vote-young mik
edged him out on punches by a lil bit.....everything else was basically the same....brooklyn had a nice verse but i was feelin miks a lil more......nice shit though...stay up |
naw i didnt edit shit but added sum lined in like 2 minutes to make da lines pretty even if dats cooo brooklyn..u can see my last like 4 lines i just wrote...there just sumthin quick wit a hint of punches wordplay na multies..just to even it out....ya feel....
uppin for votes.......UPPINNNNNNNNNNNNN |
Damn damn fine battle, both emcees were even all the way into the punches, I mean dead even, but YOUNG had some better punches in there and some funnier lines.
Vote-YOUNG |
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hmmm after readin both its really a great battle i think lines that stood out from YOUNG MIK
wanna tempt me?- ya Envy my best shit will be tested// I bless scripts, for eclectics ‘Craven’ horror stories like Wes’s// in my Greed, ya life’s cheap, ya corpse felt my aggress-sin//(aggression) waited till rigamortis set-in then gorged myself on dead skin// u go a million lines over the limit thinkin no one will notice but i did,so u wishin u didnt fold up// ud be better off if ya ass never showed up an get torn to peaces when my flows make ya blow up// those lines i liked i give young mik a 8/10 for sum nice ill punches now brooklyn With The Words Carved In Hit Me I Mean You Get Beat Like A Blackman At A L.A.P.D. Meeting Wearin A Shirt That Says Rodney/ DAMN THAT WAS GOOD Your Rhymes Is Like Mougesy Bouges They Gets No Play, You Can't Rap To Change Careers Pray And Just Get Like Mase/ I'm a Born Leader, Destroyin Niggas Like Youu Like Napoleon, Killin More Innocent Bystanders Than The Ancient Mongolian/ hmmm close in my mind but he went over the limit and i thought sum punches were out of place so7/10 vote young mik |
**couldnt edit my post dont kno why it does that all the time**
well, since brook let young edit his verse and he made it longer then my vote changes, heres the lay-out punches-young wordplay-brook flo-young style-young overall-young vote-young |
Lol, BROOKLYN dfinitely won this, he murdered poor young milk. Yo milk, why don't you battle people around your level, so maybe that way you can slightly improve in your battles because batlling newbies to vets is lame.
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wtf u on dat crack rok^im already winnin dis hahahah stupid monkeys..an fagat u alwayz scared mna u a beeyatch thats alwayz scared....
uppin for votes.an ive battle everytype of rank there is so shutthe fuk up..please... an vote or sont reply.. ......uppinnnnnnnnn |
wow definately one of da sickest battles i've seen in a while and ya'll get off brook about his long verses...some people, like me, only good at writin long battles...anywas to get down to the votes...
punches: Brooklyn wordplay: Mik Multi's: Brooklyn Flow:Brooklyn my vote: Brooklyn hot battle 4sho...shit was reallllll good Mik u good never seen anyone come this close to beatin Brooklyn Favorite Lines I Laugh In The Face Of Weak Emcees, And Stare In The Eyes Of Danger My Ecentrical Lyrics Will Exterminate Ya Species, Puttin Ya Crew Name On The List Of The Endangered/ AND Your Rhymes Is Like Mougesy Bouges They Gets No Play, You Can't Rap To Change Careers Pray And Just Get Like Mase/ I Mean Its Ok, I Know You Havin A Bad Day, Cause Ya Moms Got Raided And Ya Pops Finally Admitted He Was Gay/ Funny Shit^^ |
anyone close to beatin brook who said i diidnt beat him....shizzle......
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mik - not even close to what you usually do. Kind of a dissappoiment, only line I liked was the closer but it was too late..flow was coo tho. Obvious you half assed it and I dont blame u
brooklyn - ok verse. U brought intensity, nothin really stoodout but it was average thruout. Seemed like u wanted this battle. vote-brooklyn |
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