Uppin this.thanx so far peeps.

This was descent

needs alil work but still tight

You still droppin bangers i see


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You know

this was pretty interesting to read. yeah you do need the beat to find the flow so im not rating that. It was pretty enjoyable and it was easy to read and understand, i liked it.
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This was aiight... very basic... some of the concepts were a little played out...but, you said it was an audio drop right? I'd have to hear it in order to critique it any further... holla

Cool no probs dawg.