first off, i aint the great but i waz aight

and second,
elevate means lyk.........include metaphores and flow and make ya ryhmes more complex.........

cheers for da advice mate, atleast am gettin sum help, cheers for dat dawg, we'll ave to battle agen sum time

peace out

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come on dont sleep on dis dawg i think we no who won dis........