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assid_rane 07-25-03 02:04 AM

i know ovadoze personally m8, i htink it is his first battle, just that he rights rap songs and stuff wen hes bored, but i dont think hes battled b4, think thats y he didnt really come at ya much like.

phiXion 07-25-03 06:03 AM

yo this is against the rules,

both verses were kind of weak, no hate to yall this is constructive criticism...

both of yall should use multiz and werdplay in your verse to make your punches hit harder....and yo add more punches, but i gotta admit you guys both have a nice flow, mos def kept a nice flow thru out the whole verse, one werd of advice tho, NEVER EVER EVER use 3 lines rhyming, you have to keep it even otherwise it totally fucks up the rhythm of your verse, i noticed yall did that a few times, and none of this, ima grab a baseball bat and crack u.....not saying u said that but that kinda shit in battles is wack as fuck.....try and use personal disses, about their name, where they come from, how many battles they've won/lost.....

yall need to work on your werdplay MAJORLY, i didnt see werdplay from any of you, and i didnt see multiz, or cold disses.....try to elevate in those areas, if you need help hit me up on pm....

peace nice battle,

sorry i aint got 100 posts....peace bro'z

Ovadoze 07-25-03 09:16 AM

not really dawg this is my first battle cheack my records but i know wohat ya sayin o well

uppin ppl come lets get this raped up.

Ovadoze 07-25-03 01:30 PM

yo how many votes i need for a win ppl? soz i am new to all this and what does poll mean? when its on a post>?

MiCsYcKlE 07-25-03 01:36 PM

I thought Mc killah had this here weak battle guys
But he had better wordplay and dissing


And Phixion in a real battle you dont go by their fucking profyle or battle record

This personal's shit is fukcing lame

Be creative and make stuff up about him
thats what a battle is

Not reading there fucking profyle and verses so that way you know how to diss them

A real emcee doesnt need to see that shit to clown him

so what eva Phhixion with that crap

What site did you come form too Phixion
HUH???????

Ovadoze 07-25-03 01:43 PM

ok uppin uppin********************************************* ************************************************** ************************************************** *****************

Ovadoze 07-25-03 02:50 PM

we need to get this finished come on dawgs
lets get the votes in like ovadozeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Crysis 07-25-03 02:52 PM

ovadoze got this no doubt in my mind.........................had better everything........................................ .......................Vote ~ Ovadoze

Ovadoze 07-25-03 02:57 PM

cheers dawg we need more votes ok ppl*********************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ***********************

Ovadoze 07-25-03 04:44 PM

come on peeps we still need votes to finish this of ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''' '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

Ovadoze 07-25-03 11:18 PM

Can u ppl plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzz VOTE for dis battle''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

MetaPhysik 07-25-03 11:24 PM

overdose took it wit betta punches props 2 both tho im out holla

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Ovadoze 07-25-03 11:41 PM

cheers dawg i need .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .

Ovadoze 07-26-03 12:49 AM

come on ppl more votes needed i carnt battle in till this battle is over ''''''''''''''''''''' ovadoze''''''''''''''''''''''''

Ovadoze 07-26-03 01:52 AM

more votes needed to close this battle come on peeps plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzz


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