http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67825

^^^ please vote here for me voting on your battle!

deamr1 -

- good flow in the intro... but soft.
- good period diss... not bad line
- dissing his post count is not a good battle rap diss...
- your last line... you should make EVERY battle count

SmokaJoka666 -

- you should be a better sportsman about battles... dont trash talk!
- great wordplay
- great disses
- great structure
- great disses
- its obvious who won here...

i say smokkajokka got this one~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

lol...agree with nebo...nah..juss fuckin off yo...it's a battle so u gotta toss agressiveness in it...

peace
4:20

aight come on yo...uppin for the last vote in this bitch...close this people!!!!!!!

peace
4:20

smokajoka got this, deamr1, you got basic stuff, you gotta work on it, alright punches though

VOTE=SMOKAJOKA666

check out my battle and drop an honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69550