i think Create got this one, ok for a newb battle
watch the feedin next time, you will lose respect for feedin
but anyway
everything was pretty even but think Create had a little better
flow and structure
therefore vote=Create

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PayableOnDeath-

-good rhyming intro and kinda soft punch
-good rhyming again but soft punches
-not that great closer... needs to punch harder

$$CrEaTe$$-

-okay intro... not a really hard diss though
-nice attempt at wordplay
-not great ending... need to punch harder too!!!

Vote: Create cuz his verse was more like a battle verse...