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They were all designated "Not the Father".....By my nigga Maury...(Talk show host)
41st it must hurt for u to not know who your father is...... Pro-lif-ik u lil dick sucker...this battle done now I'm off it.... I'm the fuckin Battle Aethists who murdered this prophet..... THESE ARE THE ONLY LINES I WAS FEELING FROM YOU BUT THEY WERE HARD AND DAMAGING AS HELL GOOD JOB...... dog you ain't "real"...like a telletubbie you "soft-and-pretend"// you must have "asked to be merked" too many timez cause you got more lossez-than-winz// TIGHT BUT PLAYED A LIL I don't battle for fun...I try to dismember-mc'z// offendin'-me-please...steppin' to me'z like a pair of pants cause it often "endz-in-de-feet"// REAL GOOD I THAUGHT THEY KILLED EVERY METAPHOR FOR DE~FEAT. NICE WORK you couldn't play the "part" if I was "splittin'-ya wig"// I'm flippin'-the-script like a black man quotin' Eminem-in-his-sig//(guess who that is...lol) you-bleed-and-it-stains I'll leave you deceased-in-the-flamez// my steez-is-deranged Icebergz fall apart in the heat-of-the-game//NAILS IN THE COFFIN FAR SUPERIOR THOUGH KIND OF SIMPLE THEY WERE BETTER THEN WHAT YOUR OPPONENT OFFERED. VOTE: 41ST STREET |
thanks for the vote and feedback Word...but it's 41st Thief not street...lol...I think 41st St. is in Queenz...lol...I'm from Brooklyn...
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Word-Perfect...ya think you could poll ya vote for me?????? it would be much appreciated...thanks man...
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damn...this battle'z been up for like a month...don't sleep...vote...now................................ ..
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hey yo...guess what...y'all mufuckaz is still sleepin' on this shit...I gotta somehow change the poll to say my name so this can get on my record when it finally gets over with...
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can I up this battle yet?????? oh well...too late...uppin'...this shit's takin' forever...and is there a way to get the battle result under this account??????
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ummm...yeah...just chickin' on how this battlez doin'...this ain't uppin' it yet...but I have a feeling that will come soon...
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yo tight tght battle...........
break down punches - 41 flow - 41 structure - ice personals - tie multis - 41 vocab - tie i guess meta's - 41 overall - 41 dope ass battle..........props to both......great punches in this battle........ppl could lern from this......... |
^^^thanks ya kindly...we need some poll votes in here kidz...don't sleep...yup...100 characterz...now...
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Fo a start these 1st two lines dont rhyme very well if atall....
everything I "write's hot" like I'm a pyro holdin' lighterz-to-felt-tips// I'ma "smoke" this nigga...watch this "iceberg-get-melted"//(Iceberg420 get it) dog you ain't "real"...like a telletubbie you "soft-and-pretend"// you must have "asked to be merked" too many timez cause you got more lossez-than-winz// So iceberg gets my vote..... Go vote on my battle with shepney zaney....... |
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ummm...can you read?????? Honestly though...how do they not rhyme?????? Have you ever heard of a thing called a multi...hence the "-" thingz" showing all the rhyming wordz... |
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