I would like to point out x-centric's response:

I Liked This Pieace G...Tha Flow Was On Point..Ya Know What I Mean..Nice Wordplay Shit's Tight Keep Doin Ur Thang Man

And mine when i adressed b-square, of course no beef there b!:

Or if you like, i can just mindlessly compliment him,
Bounce, that shit was tight, you should drop more, you had me in there
Flow was great
Structure was complex and good

'since i like to be simple i have no insight and no criticism...'
Isn't it great when you're right?

no offence X-centric, and no, i don't know what you mean, elaborate, how was the flow 'on point'?

uppin....

THis piece really thouched me since both of my parents and my ex-husband are in the army. Now that all of this "war on terroism" stuff is going down I really scared of losing someone I know. This piece speaks for millions of Americans who felt and probably still do feel that way after the events of September 11th.
Keep write...your words are deep...*LOL*

*Lets it out of cage* Run free big one, run free! *kicks it up the page*...

??? huh ???

Either I have had too much... or not enough....cuz I can not understand you right now Varentao. Damn I always catch your meaning, implied or not, but this time I can not. Oh well it's been one of those weeks for me, so thanks for making me use my brain, even if I did not figure it out. I need to back away from the Bud, back away from the Bud...

*turns out the blunt*
*and pulls out hair*

this piece was heartfelt
really understood what you were saying and I must say that this piece is much respected.
nice flow and great wordplay and use of vocab
keep dropping shit like this
peace