Hey mic sycke i didnt vote on that battle dickhead........

No 13th desciple did
and said i have friends voting for me
when i think soldier sucks


And you were agreeing with him when i said a real herb takes a weak after blowing his deadline to drop his prewritten verse

thats what i said

and I KNOW YOU GUYS ALWAYS VOTE FOR EACHOTHER ANYWAYS

i been on and off this site for 2 years now

I know the Deal

I SEE YOUR NAME IN THEIR MAN AND I CO

^so thats the reason why u hate....because Av spanked u and
I voted against u....cuz this is the third thread i seen u hate on
from me in the last 10 minutes....damn....i got a cyber stalker

This was pretty good.

From a writers standpoint i can appreciate the effort and emotion put into this due to doubting this is yalls true emotions..If that's the case then it's alot harder to stepo outside the box and write from anothers veiw points..

I give it overall a 7/10...

Which is good coming from me..Basically because the content..The rest was a lackluster..I felt 13th desciple had the better ontent while bribe brought better flow with exceptionally nice content..

Wordplay? ..0/10...Kind of hurts you...Even tho i know the piece isn't meant for wordplay and things of the sort...And you don't really have to have it...It does show a good ammount of growth and elevation due to the creativity it takes to transform words into play when it's dealing with emotional/real shit..

I don't know if yall will like the critique..But this is how i feel...

Keep writing..1ne

NO BEEF

13th

i will not bother you no more

up ....

u+p........=...........up

dayum ~hot sh!T~
I enjoyed readin it...

Props to all of yahz

damn!! yall verse's were both sick...i was really feelin this drop. Both yall word play and vocab was sick. The chorus really hooked the two of yall verses together...it worked mad well. Very nice drop, keep doin yall thangz and stay up, 1