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condom had the flow.... i liked his flow more so im goin wit him... btw hit this up but anti hero had everything else so my vote goes fer anti hero fo sure.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...readid=73606... "Karat" |
Look this was tough to decide, close battle this newb came pretty hard, nice shit man.......anti-hero came hard too nice drop
BREAKDOWN** """I'm injectin you wit shots as you read each'a ma werds//1 the infection's strong, listerine couldn't clear tha germs//2 This herb's gone, Mistergreen got smoked, im'a sinester feine fo green//3 Don't miss the meaning and make sure it's not joked, ya brains thurough cleaning is needed fo u ta be seen//4 I see you a big fan of Marvel(comics), ya punches would hit hard if they was marble ebonics//5***** Tha King cuz i fill da condoms and make bitches sing, only hit raw once in a while, you know me and ya mom got dat thing.......//6 """" cOndom_king's verse, hit real hard wit personals, his punches were good.......anti had betta wordplay i guess, more complex def. but i gotta say tha kid came harder witt his disses and did it alot quicker............and i was feelin his verse more vote=condom king |
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anyone can make a punch if the line has 40 words in it... i didn't see nothin special from hero
multis-neither disses/personals-king flow-king wordplay-none punches-tie vote king |
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MY BAD FOR POSTIN HERB TWICE I ACCIDENTALLY CLICKED BACK TOO MANY TIMES AND THOUGHT IT WUZNT SENT B4 MY BAD............................................... ........................
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Man There Alot Of Hate Goin On Here
ANTI-HERO Got This Shit Hands Down Condom_King Aint All That Great I KO'd His Ass But Yea Stop The Beef Wit Anti vote-Anti-Hero |
anti-heros flow was right on, complex but works good if you can fuckin read. i didnt understand some of his shit didnt rhyme like the very end. and pro tools iono if that was supposed to rhyme with i smoke you. if it is you gotta emphasize. im not a textcee but i think you use quotation marks around wordplay and use capital letters to show that something partway through a line rhymes with something at the end. i think what would improve your shit is if you led up to a punch and then skipped a line and started the next part. it would emphasize the shit.
condom king has an excuse for a simple boring flow cuz hes a newb. his one personal made no sense, marble ebonics? ebony is also a type of wood so you coulda used that for wordplay but i realize it wouldnt have fitted. but if you gonna have a simplistic ass flow, you gotta come hard. you gotta make up for it by usin complex words na mean. vote anti-hero peace |
anti hero, u dont need to chuck a hissy fit just cos condom king is competin with u in votes, thats a pussy way to handle the situation
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Ya'll check out my battle with ANTI-HERO
it's pretty tight http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0791#post710791 |
[QUOTE]Originally posted by DaShowStoppa2
[B]hero took it wit punches complexity and flow in this piece props 2 both tho im out holla word^^^^ |
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