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-   -   ANTI-HERO v.s Condom_King (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=73551)

24 karat 08-16-03 04:31 PM

condom had the flow.... i liked his flow more so im goin wit him... btw hit this up but anti hero had everything else so my vote goes fer anti hero fo sure.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...readid=73606...


"Karat"

Meks 08-16-03 04:36 PM

Look this was tough to decide, close battle this newb came pretty hard, nice shit man.......anti-hero came hard too nice drop

BREAKDOWN**
"""I'm injectin you wit shots as you read each'a ma werds//1
the infection's strong, listerine couldn't clear tha germs//2

This herb's gone, Mistergreen got smoked, im'a sinester feine fo green//3
Don't miss the meaning and make sure it's not joked, ya brains thurough cleaning is needed fo u ta be seen//4

I see you a big fan of Marvel(comics), ya punches would hit hard if they was marble ebonics//5*****

Tha King cuz i fill da condoms and make bitches sing, only hit raw once in a while, you know me and ya mom got dat thing.......//6
""""
cOndom_king's verse, hit real hard wit personals, his punches were good.......anti had betta wordplay i guess, more complex def. but i gotta say tha kid came harder witt his disses and did it alot quicker............and i was feelin his verse more
vote=condom king

ANTI-HERO 08-16-03 04:52 PM

HERB^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^

GRaFFiK_NaTuRE 08-16-03 04:55 PM

anyone can make a punch if the line has 40 words in it... i didn't see nothin special from hero

multis-neither
disses/personals-king
flow-king
wordplay-none
punches-tie

vote king

ANTI-HERO 08-16-03 05:00 PM

HERB^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^

ANTI-HERO 08-16-03 05:01 PM

MY BAD FOR POSTIN HERB TWICE I ACCIDENTALLY CLICKED BACK TOO MANY TIMES AND THOUGHT IT WUZNT SENT B4 MY BAD............................................... ........................

Mortality 08-16-03 10:02 PM

Man There Alot Of Hate Goin On Here
ANTI-HERO Got This Shit Hands Down
Condom_King Aint All That Great
I KO'd His Ass But Yea
Stop The Beef Wit Anti

vote-Anti-Hero

MultiVersEal 08-16-03 10:57 PM

anti-heros flow was right on, complex but works good if you can fuckin read. i didnt understand some of his shit didnt rhyme like the very end. and pro tools iono if that was supposed to rhyme with i smoke you. if it is you gotta emphasize. im not a textcee but i think you use quotation marks around wordplay and use capital letters to show that something partway through a line rhymes with something at the end. i think what would improve your shit is if you led up to a punch and then skipped a line and started the next part. it would emphasize the shit.

condom king has an excuse for a simple boring flow cuz hes a newb. his one personal made no sense, marble ebonics? ebony is also a type of wood so you coulda used that for wordplay but i realize it wouldnt have fitted. but if you gonna have a simplistic ass flow, you gotta come hard. you gotta make up for it by usin complex words na mean.

vote anti-hero

peace

wogzta 08-16-03 10:57 PM

anti hero, u dont need to chuck a hissy fit just cos condom king is competin with u in votes, thats a pussy way to handle the situation

Mortality 08-17-03 12:41 AM

Ya'll check out my battle with ANTI-HERO
it's pretty tight
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0791#post710791

youngblood 08-17-03 12:52 AM

[QUOTE]Originally posted by DaShowStoppa2
[B]hero took it wit punches complexity and flow in this piece props 2 both tho im out holla

word^^^^


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