still uppin 4 sum feedbak~1~

its gett'n hot in huerre.................dis mami brings hotness to da ta

its gett'n hot in huerre.................dis mami brings hotness to da table..................keep it up mami...............1ne

^not all tha tyme only wen im heated~1~

it wasnt the most "Descriptive" or most "Accurate" cultivation of the hood but some of your stanzas had meaning...i think its coo seein a fems point of view for the hood...but you gotta realize there are some more point in which you could have been more on point wit...

but i like the transition from demonstration of the hood....to makin it better...i can feel that....

This is sumthin i can relate to.Im glad u brang heat on to this subject keep droppin~1~

Aight lemmie explain to you what I said because you obviously misunderstood me. I told you before I said anything that I didn't want to come off as rude or mean but that I felt it needed to be said... I never said that you didn't live in the ghetto, for all I know you do, I jus said you come off as fake to me. That's my opinion, you don't have to like it, jus like I don't have to like your poetry or your depiciton of a life on the streets. I'm not tryna come at you like a bitch because I personally have more respect for myself than that, I prefer to carry myself as a lady. It was feedback, something I appoligized for from the getgo... because I knew you would look at it the wrong way. Maybe I should have jus kept my opinions to myself instead of "cloggin your thread" an jus said that I would like to see more diverse topics from you, but I felt like you were "clogging the forum" with repetative peices about "your hood"... like I said before, had I known homeboi was gonna say it I would have kept it to myself. But don't come at me like that when I wasn't insulting you on purpose, if you took it that way it's on you... lettin you know tha deal, again not hatin, jus statin. Peace

^^^^^^^^^^^I dnt want in tha arguement but u should read everthig b4 u start cumin at her all sideways.Looks like u spoke too soon~1~

exactly...