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Accelerate 08-24-03 03:48 PM

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Originally posted by ShyLock
SkiddLeZZ [AH HA] and i'muh fuckin herb?! daw! you FUCKIN LISTEN TO YO SISTUH! herb ass BITCH! [AH HA!] and i'm the herb?! [AH HA] you funny daw.. REAL funny.. [AH HA] (SIKE!) well as usual! i'm still uppin fo feedback.. i appreciate yall comin back at this.. take it easy MCs.. peeycce!



[Ah ha] my sister is older than me. Daw, don't talk stupid shit.[Ah Ha]If I'm Funny, I'm glad I made you laugh.[AH HA] Because when I battle you, maybe I'll be the one having fun. take it easy femcee,peeyce.

Sleepin'Lungfish 08-24-03 03:59 PM

I really liked this rap, not being any fan of Bush myself. And you know what the funny part is? Proof there is no God, this crazy bastard with a hard on for war has actually been nomited for a Nobel Peace Prize.

ShyLock 08-25-03 08:21 AM

thank you thank you for all the feedback.. and i'm still uppin for more! take it easy MCs! i'm outtie!

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[Ah ha] my sister is older than me. Daw, don't talk stupid shit.[Ah Ha]If I'm Funny, I'm glad I made you laugh.[AH HA] Because when I battle you, maybe I'll be the one having fun. take it easy femcee,peeyce.


^^set it up then bitch!

Accelerate 08-25-03 12:45 PM

O.k but your spittin firstbuddy boy, or nothins set up

ShyLock 08-25-03 01:45 PM

ay ALL TRUE MCs.. dont let this bitch SkiddLeZZ get into your way of givin some good quality feedback.. so go ahead and give more feedback.. it will be appreciated.. take it easy TO ALL TRUE MCs.. i'm outtie!

Accelerate 08-25-03 01:59 PM

I give good feedback. i was speakin truth when I said what i said. you need to elevate. don't hate.

ShyLock 08-26-03 06:41 AM

ok man.. whatevuh.. i aint gon waist my time just arguin wit you.. i just wanted feedback.. and we'll see who needs the elevatin when the battles gets done voted on.. just remembuh.. i'muh newbie.. lose to me.. that's a helluh big drop in yo MC reputation.. BUT ANYWAY! more feedback yall.. keep em comin! take it easy MCs.. i'm outtie!

Accelerate 08-26-03 02:11 PM

who said I'll lose to you. I threw out a half assed verse out there.

bouncedoggydog 08-26-03 02:55 PM

I think you put more emotion than logic into this drop, I can respect your opinion, but your politics need some elevation.

You seemed to force alot of this out, I thionk you could have done a much better job had you planned and wrote it. Freestyle's tend to come off like this, but you can clean it up some.

I do not agree with your stance here, but that's another discusion. I just wish you could provide and intellegent foundation for your peice, it was mostly comprised of personal emotion and a huge lack of insight into the matter. Yes it is illegal to denounce the president durring time of conflict, it has not been inforced in a very long time, but skidelzz was correct when he interjected that thought. I do have the credentials to substantiate my claims, and I think you should take the time to add your thoguhts to the emcee interaction thread on this topic. I would love to debate you on that issue... Or anyone else for that matter. Prophet skidelezz was acurate in his comment, and everyone should be aware that the media is liberally controlled and influenced. Politics are a serious business, you can't just hate Bush and not understand the arena in which they're played...

ShyLock 08-28-03 06:44 AM

uppin fo more feedback yall.. drop yuh honest voices up on this peice.. take it easy MCs.. i'm outtie!

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who said I'll lose to you. I threw out a half assed verse out there


^^daw! you aint gettin what i'm trynuh say.. i was sayin! "IF you lose to a newbie! that's a pretty big ass drop on yo MC REP.. get it?!

ShyLock 08-28-03 06:48 AM

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I do not agree with your stance here, but that's another discusion. I just wish you could provide and intellegent foundation for your peice, it was mostly comprised of personal emotion and a huge lack of insight into the matter. Yes it is illegal to denounce the president durring time of conflict, it has not been inforced in a very long time, but skidelzz was correct when he interjected that thought. I do have the credentials to substantiate my claims, and I think you should take the time to add your thoguhts to the emcee interaction thread on this topic. I would love to debate you on that issue... Or anyone else for that matter. Prophet skidelezz was acurate in his comment, and everyone should be aware that the media is liberally controlled and influenced. Politics are a serious business, you can't just hate Bush and not understand the arena in which they're played...


now that's some HELLUH GOOD FEEDBACK! but ay listen! how about i just do what i do.. like how i did this.. PM you this peice i created.. and you tell me how i can clean the shit up.. like i said! i'm new to all this shit! Take it easy MC.. i'm outtie!

bouncedoggydog 08-28-03 06:42 PM

^ Anytime dawg, I'm all for the elvation of the game, I don't hate, unless I'm agrivated.. I will always provide REAL feedback and those who choose to accept people's advice, tend to prosper fromt he wisdom of others.. If you ever want me to give you an honest opinion, just hit me up. I anint here for records or braggin right's, I just want to promote and elevate the culture before it is dismantled by commercialist' and that is real!!! Like I said before I do this shit for real, week in and week out, just here on RB I don't have to put on a show... Much respect..

ShyLock 08-29-03 06:33 AM

^^DAW! about that DAMN time we had someone here to give good feedback.. not that anyone else gave bad ones.. well everyone did give good ones and it was they opinion so i can respect that.. but ay man.. good lookin out daw.. i'll look you up whenever aright? thanks B! take it easy MC.. i'm outtie!


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