yo this was deep, this was the kinda poetry you had to use your mind on ya know what I mean? Just some deep shit,... great flows and vocab combined with emotions and a deeper message hidden within.
That's the way it's gotta be.
Keep droppin - resp.

^Thanks a mil man thanks to all for your replies, elevation is key, 1luv.

Abstract and cryptic.

Letting rip your problems past/present. In a way which brings self satisfaction if nothing else.

Because you reveal little in a blatant way with this piece. Yet the way you wrote it brings forth the power. To understand that power, one will have to dig (which'll take a long time). I most definetly appreciate this 'style'. I too most of the time write hiding the personal meanings. Gah!...

Anyway, i got parts of it. Mostly probably aren't your own meanings. But what i got out of them. Once again, that's the versatility (albeit to many akward and too complex) of this 'style'. Which you actually write like a lot. Though not as heavily as this (in my opinion).

...resp...

This was a hot poem you started off good and came dope through the whole piece nice job here are the lines i liked the most off ya verse..


Tight...

Keep it coming..

^Thanks always V and thanks Ra both replies was on point keep em comin ya'll im lovin the, 1luv.