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Listen i cant vote but ill give feedback
Multis: Dose Wordplay: No Question DOSE Punches: Dose Flow: Niegher Metas/Similies: both Dose had a sick verse even tho it was probably pre written, His wordplay was ill, nice shit dog Eh please hit this up wit an honest one, its gettin mad sleeped cuz everyone thinks im a newb http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77357 |
IT Wasnt Prewritten took me 15mins but i checked half way.......its 4-2......Unofficaly ok il peep it................................................ ....
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aight check it....i know Overdose thinks i ride biddy's dick or somethin like that but im not a dick rider and im gonna vote honestly...........
Biddy- I HAVE SEEN WAY BETTER ShIT OUT oF YOU!! i think u underestimated this one... Dose-Damn that was a nice verse. Ill to the 3 power. Flow - Dose Punches - Biddy (Dose talked about himself alot) Structure - Biddy Multis - Dose Wordplay - Dose Humor - Neither Creativity - Tie Standout Lines - Tie Vote - Dose (biddy you should have came harder for real) couldnt help voting on this one.... and no i am not a dick rider i vote what i feel not what aint true |
shit my fuckin bad with the names i meant *Drive* not Dose im a fuckin retard............................................ .............................
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5-2......3-2 Polled.............Upin If You Voted and get 100 posts plz poll it................................................ .................................................. ........
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Ffs ............Sleeeep on your battle not mines*............................................ .................................................. .................................................. ......................................
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punches: ov (he hit you more freqeuntly and harder than you hit him - 80 % of $biddy$' verse was kinda open mic, and not even impressive shit... just egocentric non-demean rambling)
personals: n/a multi's: more effective use from overdrive (biddy had as well no doubt) flow: tied metaphors: i rarely caught a glimpse wordplay: ov vocab: tied complexity: ov creativity: ov originality: i'm feeling ov opener & closer ov vote= ov best quote would go to ov but i can't be fucked to find the quote |
Great Battle , I WAS FEELIN BOTH..But Biddys punches I think landed harder ...... Dis was real close .......... ,
structure - OD punches - Biddy Flow - OD Creativity - OD Complexity - Biddy multies - OD Vocab - Biddy wordplay - Biddy vote Biddy by a cunt hair http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77315 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77580 Peep one of dese or both BENEN MAD SLETPED ON..pc |
o and overdrive STOP FUCKIN' CAPITALISING THE FIRST MUTHAFUCKING LETTER OF EVERY WORD... please for god sake.. i hate reading battles when people do that, it slows one's read down and makes it as if you verse is complexity when you're just freaking making it damn difficult to read... you also flow better... but i don't expect you to listen... most people online are goats... metaphorically speaking... peace to both... biddy diss you opponent more.... have more wordplay more personal and more wow punches rather the filler (i.e. anything tahts not setting up a punches or punches = filler), aight.... and the freakin' ~'s
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yea i think overdrive took this...heres how ima break it down...
flow-overdrive wordplay-overdrive punches-biddy multi's-biddy meta's-overdrive structure-overdrive creativity-overdrive complexity-biddy comedy-overdrive enjoyment-both overall-overdrive good battle...stay up.... yep... pz 1 |
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