Thanks for the feed on this and I'll be sure to take this back to the lab.

I'll keep an eye out for those new drops.

its a basic rhymin scheme but its good fo da concept, felt it yo

keep droppin

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Good shot on that feedback, and I know this is a played piece, but it was what I was feeling at the time.

Thanks and good shots.....

this was a pretty good drop. These 4 lines stook out:

Was I just blinded by infatuation for some other broad,
Or did my heart's procrastination make my mind believe a fraud//
But now whatever the case is, I just can't replace this
I took away my love and now my feelings are faceless//

i flowed this to one of my beats and it just ripped. Nice work.

i thought it was aight, the vocab needs to elevate, ur worplay was pretty good, and the content was ok. keep ya chin up and keep elevatin wit each post and youll do fine