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09-21-03 11:45 AM |
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Originally posted by Legendary
A crazy twist you had at the end there. Why you shoot yourself?
I liked reading this. The first few lines didn't really do much for me but as I got into it more it kept my attention pretty good and got me wondering. Kind of like something out of a sci-fi movie. People with no faces and getting chased by some figure in a robe then waking up and shooting yourself and you don't even know why. Crazy.
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HELL YES...THIS WAS SOME CRAZY STUFF....IT WAS LIKE SCI-FI POETRY...SCI-FI POETRY JAM AND SHIT..LMAO...IT WAS A GOOD PIECE...THE CRAZINESS KEPT MY ATTENTION....HEAVY |
