HOLDS UP HANDS IM gege's numba 1 FAn
 

gurl you knew id find this

Its hard to sit back and watch someone you love die slowly,
solely of their own will, and contempt for life wholly.

your unique ryhme scheme that ive ALWAYS admired you find ways to ryhme anything and Have it make sense
this is a nice intro oto your peice
youve always made it so that we can FORSEE what ever it is your story holds
but as i remeber there is ALWAYS a wonderful twist to each of your peices

In a world full of temptation, you always succomb,
Scars on arms dont purge pain, they just make your heart numb.
^
lets you kno that teh person thats writing / telling this CARES deeply for teh person
and feels for them


YOU'RE NOT A CHILD, I'M TIRED OF ACTING LIKE YOUR MOTHER.
NOT A CHILD,_ SURE NOT A MAN, NO LONGER CAN YOU MASK IT,
YOU'RE DRIVING THE NAILS STRAIGHT INTO YOUR OWN CASKET.


I BELIVE that this is teh CLIMAX to your peice gege

damn you are so talented

im once again in awe of you and the only thing i regret is the fat that ive been gone so long i kno ive missed so many peices from you.not only you but necro, doped, keezy

all of you......
wonderful gege

simply wonderful

hazy baby

wowwwwwww.... just WOW... nice piece... I can definitely relate to it, since I've a friend who's feeling exactly the same and you just stand there, watching and feeling hopeless, becuz no matter how much effort you put into it... it never seems to work out.
Very very nice piece, very inspirering and very sad on the other hand.
This was a piece of honest poetry, just letting your feelings out and I enjoyed every single bit of it.
Keep droppin

resp