lol...tha fuck?? werent punches? whut didnt u understand? u must b illiterate or sumthin



aiite w/e....2-0 uppin fo sum poll votes///////////////



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azn came really weak. he had almost no multis and his shit was elementary, like 80'sm rap.

my vote goes to app, but his structure could have been better, over his felt like an actual verse, not a generic lymeric like the other one did
vote=apprentice

here is a link to one of my battles, everyone feel free to stop in and read, you don't have to vote, but it would be nice

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79486

iight yall uppin on this battle.....................I need 2 more vote to finish this shit off come on yall!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

apprentice won this with better punches/disses, flow, az seemed to be forcing shit because you went stongly hitting, practise metas, complexity, use personals but above all hit ya opponent more, creatively and originally, you need wow punches or lines for each line - appr like everyone could improve work on all categories and improve your structure... was all over the place... could have been better vote = appre