not bad but not brilliant, just ok, tried bit to hard to get them numbers in the rhyme...........................

not bad but not brilliant, just ok, tried bit to hard to get them numbers in the rhyme...........................all in all though, ok. Just bit of feedback for ya. Constructive criticism - from a newbie may not be valuable but people will agree

I STAND HERE ALONE ON THE STAGE SPITTIN ON THE MIC ALL MY RAGE 4 ALL THE MOTHAFUCKAS WHO DOUBTED ME STAND UP AND LOOK AT ME ADORINGLY HOLLA