Tight collab..........Let me break this shit down
WORD~PERFECT your verse was iLL.............U had some nice lines......You wordplay was untop of it's game...........Vocabulary was kinda weak but you still Rip this shit up nonetheless.........Multies were tight , your rhyme scheme was blazing.............and your structure was tight.........Overall I give ur verse an 8/10
shEpNeY_zAnY your verse was aight , you didnt come out as strong as I wanted you too..............Your Disses were simple , some of them were aight though.............But u didnt come as hard as the other cats.......You played wit ur words good , your structure was tight , Nice rhyme scheme , but your disses held you down........Overall I give your verse a 7/10...
BLAC HAZE's verse was Nice , it would sound tight in audio.....But like Shepney your disses were weak , Your punches didnt hit hard enough.......Your verse sounded like you just keyed something up quickly..............Your wordplay was Great........Multies were Aight.......U Lacked Vocab , your structure was blazing and your rhyme scheme was On Fire.....................Overall I give your verse a 7/10.......
Personally I think that Propain had the best disses in this piece...........His shit had me laughing all the way through....It was just halirious....He cameout funny.................He's Lines were tight...........where it’s at, Puffy, face the facts, make all the “I Need A Girl’s” you want, but Jennifer ain’t coming back/
hahahahahaha^^^^^^^^^^.............iLL shit man...........Overall I give your verses a 9/10...
Now Syntext , even though u made a diss open mic towards aNb......I will still give you feedback........First of all , STOP talking about Hall Of Fame because this piece will never be nominated to R-B Legend.............Anyways dawg both your verses were Nice.........U had sum funny shit in there too.....................Your verses were more hardcore than funny.........U had sum nice multies and wordplay...........I also liked your rhyme scheme.... ,..........Overall I give your verses a 7.5/10.....................................And Overall I give this collab an 7.9/10.....Hell 7.9 is one point behind an 8 , so I might aswell give ya all the 8..............So overall this collab get an 8/10.......It had a tight concept too it..........Nice shit cuzznz..........And one more thing...............THIS IS NOT R-B LEGENDS MATERIAL..........Now return the favour on both of these pieces
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