thnx ya'll for peeping da battle....

upping this battle (#4)

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Its a lot of wordplay in my verse, but I forgot that I was in the frontlines....I guess I should of "quoted" it or put it in bold print.....Cuz I know that the only way people notice it.....LoL

Ok Im gonna break this down
C-drama, you first
I bruise your nerves when I loosely curse contusive verbs//
You's been merked~thrown away like a fuse that's burnt//

^^nice opener, good use of multi's, didn't hit too hard but a nice way to open.

When I use the bird you [fall] like it was [deuce the third]//(First day of Autumn->23rd)
The news was heard~his mom's crying when this dude's in urns//

^^not bad....decent punch

This useless turd's more PLAYED OUT than the ORIGIN OF YOUR NAME//
He gon switch KEN for his name when I leave his clothes like the FLUID IN YA VEIN//

^^blah, didnt like this, maybe it was cuz you repeated name twice.

.......are you insane? ~ I'm the sickest of em all//
And we all sick of ya mom ~ posting "IN MEMORY OF" PICTURES ON THE WALL//

^^ok, poor structure, decent bar.

....It's a sad world....but everybody's gotta go//
....and by the way....tell ya pops I said hello (haha)//

^^blah.

Overall-ok verse, ok wordplay, ok punches, ok flow. Lol, pretty average verse not too good not too bad. 5/10

Capcom-

C-Drama, lil dirty bitch if I.C.U. you will See Drama
I'm tear your brain out ya skull & fed ex it to ya mama

^^bad opener, where's the creativity?

Like a Thugged out teacher, He wanna test my gangsta
So I'ma Turn my test in wit Mack 11's & serve this wanksta

^^might as well have rhymed pussy and wussy, once again not hard-hitting, no creativity.

GoT Beef? And I'll shank ya, I dont give a fuck about You
If I put ya Life on a scale from 1-10...Bitch u'd rank about 2.

^^wack, not hard hittinh, bad punch, blah.


C_Drama? If U'd of kept ya mouth shut, I'd a left u alone
Like ya girlfriend did when You bought ya Fag Boyfriend Home

^^best bar in your verse, still weak though, blah.


Dawg its over, the crowd is still laughin at u cuz of my verse
Just remember when you people poll I'm in the 2nd slot, Not 1st

^^um...where is the punch exactly?

Overall-man what the hell was that? I though that verse was wack, honestly. Maybe it was cuz you didn't have much time to type it up. If that's so, then next time don't let anyone rush you, just take your time and use some creativity.1/10

Vote=C-drama

im voting for cdrama.. his verse had more punchlines and better wordplay.. vote cdrama............................................ .................................................. ..............................

Wheres the Creativity? LoL I guess no one see's tha I.C.U. Wordplay in there....if U people dont know ICU stands for Intensive Care Unit...LoL I bet a lot of people be missin that.

Well......

C_Drama Verse Was Week And Your Structure Was Everywhere...
Capcom Hit Harder He Had Play'd Lines But He Hit Harder Than Him^

Vt-Capcom

Return The Favour

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80946

i'll break it down

flow- capcom
punches - both
wordplay - capcom
personals - capcom
enjoyablity - capcom
vocab - c drama
multies c drama

overall capcom took this with a better allround verse

Punchlines: Cap
Wordplay: cap (i understood his metas)
Flow: C-Drama
Metas: Cap
Multis: Neither

close battle but cap took it in my eyes

keep elevatin

well...Drama had a nice verse...i like the 23rd line...very creative...Cap came wit the gangsta/wanksta....wow....what were you thinkin..that alone should speak for itslef, but he had a few coo lines in there...but C Drama gets my vote, he coulda finished it off better, but he got it by a little...


.peace.

ok herez the breakdown:

drama's ending just sucked and that wanksta line capcom used was wack so here we go children

flow:aint really a flow in text
wordplay:drama
punches:both
personals:neither
humor:drama...
complexity:capcom
creativity:drama
structure:capcom
multiples:capcom
overall:capcom


yit da dee