aight, good vocab

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uppin this so ppl can read this one before they read the sequel. leave some feedback on this if u want.

For a simple structure this drop had good flow. For a collab, it did not stray from topic as many collabs do. I think you both got your points across, I just would rather see more complexity and emotion in this drop. I cant say I could rap it out, but I know it would be much better in an audio, if performed well. I think the topic is a bit played but this drop kind of hit upon other aspects of living that life.

keep elevating

peace