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Pretty decent, not bad flow to it, a little shaky at times; Skiddelz structure was mor organized, so i think a big thing i could recommend to you Relik is to work on evening out your lines. Vocab was there, a little forced at times, the image wasnt bad, Overall i thought this was pretty enjoyable to read.
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gra-zias! an i will structure it better an work on it next time
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hmm i loved this
at one point during the letter to chris my eyes got kinda teary this was heart felt and i loved it, flow made it read very easily if you would be so kind (sorry but all 3 are being slept on) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81665 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81616 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81183 |
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