| Baron Mynd |
09-25-03 11:02 AM |
Ok, im back. .
topic was played like woah! Flow was pretty decent, im guessing first verse was Avalon's because it has that RM writing style for the flow, vocab was decent, could of used more internals and multi's to help spice it up, but content wise it wasnt bad, a few good points raised, i never really thought of Chrit as a topical head but he came out ok on this piece, it held my attention throughout, writers voice and direction to it could of been better, word choice at times was a little off but ehhh, you learn more of how to control that with experience, not a bad collab though.
Eace-Pay.
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