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Dez 09-25-03 05:05 PM

the subject matter seemed to cliche for me..(i.e. im from the hood) so i never really could get into it..it flowed beautifully, could use a few multis, but overall a decent read.

Menik 09-25-03 06:13 PM

Hey man thanks for the feedback its much appreciated, keep it coming, thanks.

destherapper 09-25-03 07:20 PM

Good peice masta c...you had good multies could have been better but you know...your flow was great...easy read i think.....i was feeling the vibe of this peice though....your rhyme scheme was good.....and you had good structure.....keep dropping Masta C...

severe lyrics 09-25-03 07:26 PM

i really like readin ur stuff this was one of the better ones that ive read keep it up

Menik 09-25-03 08:53 PM

Hey thanks guys for the feedback, keep it coming, much appreciated. thanks.


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