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Dimez 09-28-03 09:58 PM

F*CKIN CLIT RIDA... U ONLY VOTED 4 HER CUZ I MERKED U!


















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Dimez 09-28-03 10:01 PM

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wtf... how the fuck did mj get the vote

DAFUKKOUTAHEA!!!!!!












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LEARN TO VOTE! AND READ!





willybob or w.e u voted 4 her cuz i merked u so ur vote dont count...


--------->It was fairley even, but Divinity just came harder. Nice battle both of you.


NOW THATS A REAL VOTE!!!!

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Mary~Jane 09-28-03 10:15 PM

LMAO @ the pic you posted divinity... i hope you aint tryin to start beef or nuttin... hip hops all luv girl u needa chill

Dimez 09-28-03 10:18 PM

LoL.... Glad U Like It!

P.S G I dont do net beef like some peeps


~one!~




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VOTES NEEDED!

Strategies 09-28-03 10:22 PM


Cerebral has to say something.Mary Jane's last line got that ass.
Breakdown

Complexity=MaryJane
Flow=Lady Divinity
Wordplay=Mary Jane
Vocab=Lady Divinity
Structure=Mary Jane
Punches=Mary Jane
Multis=Mary Jane

Overall=Mary Jane

Damn Girl You Got Some Skills

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Dimez 09-28-03 10:32 PM

WTF????????
















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LOL DAMN THESE NEWBS CANT VOTE

E-SYDE THUG 09-28-03 10:39 PM

damn dis was too close for me to vote on but i will give tha ladiez thurr propz they both killed thiz shit

mdizz 09-28-03 10:39 PM

holy sheeeeit a chic fight

vote mj

cuz..both had good wordplay, divinity had tha 1 personal of this battle but wasnt really that good, mary jane had much better flo and her punches were more to tha point...and l.d. had some played shit

props though 2 ill femcees

Dimez 09-28-03 10:41 PM

TOO CLOSE??? HOW DO U PPL THINK SHE WON??












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personal??? she doesent even know me get a l ife

ålphå bë† 09-28-03 10:46 PM

Tight Ass Battle...Both Ladies Came Wit Some Serious Skills.Evenly Matched I Must Say.Strong Punches,Nice Multies.Both Had Complexity & Nice Metas But Im Gon Hafta Go Wit Lady D On This One...Her Opener Took It

Vote-Lady D

Much Props

Dimez 09-28-03 10:48 PM

the real votes are 2-2















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ppl VOTE ON THE DAMN POLL!!!!

Mary~Jane 09-28-03 10:54 PM

ok on tha reel why you trippin ova this shit gurl? a votes a vote its what peeps feel about it









------------uppin 4 more votes------------------

Kclipz 4 Murkin 09-28-03 10:55 PM

~LaDy DiViNiTy~
Mary~Jane Left A ‘PMS’ Stain , your raps~plain ash~grain and thats the "end of you", like i just wrote your last~name!!!// she 's gettin dragged~away like a bitch~chained to the frame of a car in the fast~lane//
~1~nice intro felt heat right in the beginnin and used good multies and punches

no~doubt you get "punched~out" like your leavin'~work//
believe~my~words, you'll be leavin~earth or sweeped off it like unneeded~dirt//
~2~damn that was a clever punch in the first line niceness in that and your multies flowed nicely which is a key in using them

Illiterate ~ Female~ Saying Unarticulate Crap Like 'Anorexia' is 'Phat'//
Im laying This Down Plain, U F*ckin’ 'Suck' and I aint Being 'Ironic' wit Dat//
~3~lol that was funny not really to extreme of a punch but got the job done nice

I CONTROL U like COMPOSERS, Put U Threw Pain By Pulling Out Your Nose-Hairs 4 Closure//
Bitch Is 'Taking pictures' of Her whack 'Rap' to get Her-Self some 'Exposure'//
~4~LMMFAO damn lol that was nice lol "jus to git sum expousure lol that was tight and still keeping the flow the whole peice good

Place A 'Ceramics' Ontop Of ur CRANIUM so you can say your 'Head-Strong'//
Ya never say things 'Right' strangle ya wit tha cord~ofa~mic now ya Definitely 'Dead-Wrong'//
~5~[/B]not bad ending nice peice had punches flowed nicely had everythin that is needed for a good battle verse and enjoyed reading it was simple and had the complexity nice job
id say a 9.5/10[/B]


mary jane

Anotha bitch gets swell~headed, `self~centered` now hell~headed
kinda lame entrance wasnt heated at all little multi like you werent experienced with them
my felt~presence belts~sentences, `housin` you like `rentin tenantsuh not that bad still not that heated for a battle but had good wordplay on this one`
you aint nice, I`m `so~tight`writin lyrics that can `(K)not tie`
constantly~winnin spittin words `gettin re(a)d more` than `stop lights`Stop lights? lol that was pretty decent i liked that in this battle kinda used lines like that but still decent
Lady~Divinity you started this shit, now im gon` finish
You couldn`t hang wit my `bars` if ya name was `Guiness`
thas like cockyness now your gitten angry in the verse it seems wich was a lil late but still wasnt that bad
I`ll `swallow` ya wackness, then `shit it out` to `pass tha truth`
you so ugly, playin `co-ed ball` is the only way `dudes make a pass~at~you!`DAMN! That was mean lol i loved that line lolthat hit hard got the job done correctly and flowed well
you just got fucked~up, someone tell her to stop~speakin
Cuz Divinity only `layin the law`, when fuckin `multiple policemen` this line and the one above were the hardest lines in this whole verse and they hit great they were extremely thought out well and used them the correct way in meaning of persoanls/punches flow was good but couldve been better i give this peice a 9.10
THIS WAS A GOOD BATTLE BUT I GOTTA GIVE IT TOO ~LaDy DiViNiTy~ ON THIS ONE SHE HAD THE BETTER OVERALL VERSE NO HATE JUS EXPLAINING IT THE WAY I SAW IT GOOD BATTLE TO BOTH EMCEES

Dimez 09-28-03 11:01 PM

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~LaDy DiViNiTy~
Mary~Jane Left A ‘PMS’ Stain , your raps~plain ash~grain and thats the "end of you", like i just wrote your last~name!!!// she 's gettin dragged~away like a bitch~chained to the frame of a car in the fast~lane//
~1~nice intro felt heat right in the beginnin and used good multies and punches

no~doubt you get "punched~out" like your leavin'~work//
believe~my~words, you'll be leavin~earth or sweeped off it like unneeded~dirt//
~2~damn that was a clever punch in the first line niceness in that and your multies flowed nicely which is a key in using them

Illiterate ~ Female~ Saying Unarticulate Crap Like 'Anorexia' is 'Phat'//
Im laying This Down Plain, U F*ckin’ 'Suck' and I aint Being 'Ironic' wit Dat//
~3~lol that was funny not really to extreme of a punch but got the job done nice

I CONTROL U like COMPOSERS, Put U Threw Pain By Pulling Out Your Nose-Hairs 4 Closure//
Bitch Is 'Taking pictures' of Her whack 'Rap' to get Her-Self some 'Exposure'//
~4~LMMFAO damn lol that was nice lol "jus to git sum expousure lol that was tight and still keeping the flow the whole peice good

Place A 'Ceramics' Ontop Of ur CRANIUM so you can say your 'Head-Strong'//
Ya never say things 'Right' strangle ya wit tha cord~ofa~mic now ya Definitely 'Dead-Wrong'//
~5~
not bad ending nice peice had punches flowed nicely had everythin that is needed for a good battle verse and enjoyed reading it was simple and had the complexity nice job
id say a 9.5/10[/B]


mary jane

Anotha bitch gets swell~headed, `self~centered` now hell~headed
kinda lame entrance wasnt heated at all little multi like you werent experienced with them
my felt~presence belts~sentences, `housin` you like `rentin tenantsuh not that bad still not that heated for a battle but had good wordplay on this one`
you aint nice, I`m `so~tight`writin lyrics that can `(K)not tie`
constantly~winnin spittin words `gettin re(a)d more` than `stop lights`Stop lights? lol that was pretty decent i liked that in this battle kinda used lines like that but still decent
Lady~Divinity you started this shit, now im gon` finish
You couldn`t hang wit my `bars` if ya name was `Guiness`
thas like cockyness now your gitten angry in the verse it seems wich was a lil late but still wasnt that bad
I`ll `swallow` ya wackness, then `shit it out` to `pass tha truth`
you so ugly, playin `co-ed ball` is the only way `dudes make a pass~at~you!`DAMN! That was mean lol i loved that line lolthat hit hard got the job done correctly and flowed well
you just got fucked~up, someone tell her to stop~speakin
Cuz Divinity only `layin the law`, when fuckin `multiple policemen` this line and the one above were the hardest lines in this whole verse and they hit great they were extremely thought out well and used them the correct way in meaning of persoanls/punches flow was good but couldve been better i give this peice a 9.10
THIS WAS A GOOD BATTLE BUT I GOTTA GIVE IT TOO ~LaDy DiViNiTy~ ON THIS ONE SHE HAD THE BETTER OVERALL VERSE NO HATE JUS EXPLAINING IT THE WAY I SAW IT GOOD BATTLE TO BOTH EMCEES
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SO THE VOTE IS 4 ME?

WHY AINT IT ON THE POLL?!?!?!

K.O._Guy 09-28-03 11:02 PM

iight mj gets this cuz she fine as hell.........naw im juss playin butchu lookin good ma

but on da reel heer it is fo yall...

imma give it to mary jane cuz i think she got it wit better punches, flow and wordplay....but both of u probaly sum of the illest femcees i seen...
stay up both of yall


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