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Trah Siph 10-06-03 08:39 AM

thjat was good, liked it and it was interesting.............................

7or8 out of ten

Edicius 10-06-03 11:21 AM

Jup:)

Dirty Sally 10-06-03 11:38 AM

That was a good drop on both accounts. Good flow and vocab. You guys complimented eachother nicely. I was feeling it-

TDC- The problem isnt religion, but the people who believe, turnin in to their own colonel/
they change aspects to their own vision by just adjustin gods journal (very nice)

MM- Say next time you do things different, yet they?re always the same/
Whether it?s innder belief or outer showing, shit never goes to plan (also very nice)

You guys collaborated excellently. Keep it up.

Edicius 10-06-03 11:44 AM

:) Werdizzle preciated

Evolve 10-06-03 12:15 PM

this was a decent piece... the rhyme scheme & volcab were kinda
simple... it wasnt a bad piece... the concept was pretty good...
Overall not bad


Peace

Edicius 10-06-03 01:04 PM

Thnx ^^ preciated

Edicius 10-07-03 01:02 PM

And Up^^

Born To Kill 10-07-03 01:20 PM

Very tight piece...

I hate colabs for some reason though...

That's why I peeped ya verse called, "Little Piece" from several months back...

This one was pretty good though...
Hard message to digest, but that's the meaning of being deep, I suppose.
Makin fuckers face reality.

This did.

I liked the closer from Mystik...

We belong here...

Very true...

Peace

Edicius 10-07-03 09:14 PM

Iite thnx for the feedback

Up^

Edicius 10-23-03 09:42 AM

Open for more feedback..

PD 10-23-03 09:48 AM

The problem isnt religion ,but the people who believe,turnin in to their own colonel,
they change aspects to their own visions by just adjustin gods journal.

I couldn't have said it any better.... great collab... great concept... very original... hot shit....


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