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-   -   Carsonjet -v- Lyrical Cyanide (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=84015)

Dimez 10-10-03 11:29 AM

-Brixton- that was ill...

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jus statin my oppinion

- Prospect - 10-10-03 11:37 AM

hey....nice free-post......bounce-
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Dimez 10-10-03 11:55 AM

carsonjet ur the1 who freeposts ur lil psychotic shit on my threads..........................
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A.T. 10-10-03 12:24 PM

carsonjet- had trouble readin your flow, but I caught on after
I read the first line three times.... but overall, you had some
nice punches, decent wordplay, and a few good multies...
overall I rate your shit at a 7

Brixton- had good structure and a good flow... not much for
punches, but your word play was decent too... if you would
have thrown in at least 2 good punches... I would give you an
8, but the lack of punches lowers you to a 6.... nice spit though
just make sure your punches "HIT"...

vote- CJ
A.T.

can yall vote on my battle since i voted on yours...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84564

.|Bi0niclE|. 10-10-03 12:24 PM

.|Lyrical, ur verse was well put together|.
.|punches from start to finish|.
.|flow was up there|.
.|n ur wordplay held rounded it off|.
.|it was a good verse|.
.|but ur downfall was tha u kinda lacked a lil in the creativity dept|.
.|but outside of that, ur shit was tight|.

.|carsonjet, ya shit was deathly creative|.
.|came out w/ punches from the bell|.
.|flow was up and personals hit|.
.|all together good verse|.
.|definitly was up to usual standards|.

.|this was a very hard battle to vote on|.
.|both emcees came out very nice|.
.|but in the end|.
.|carsonjet took this w/ the notch on the creativity factor|.

.|vote-carsonjet|.

.|drop a vote here|.
.|http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=84443|.
.|appreciate it|.


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