t'was a nice peice...
I was feelin that shit bout my hero being the criminal who stayed
true to himself... very nice finish... overall, the flow was good,
content was great, and the use of all these together, brought
out some good shit...
A.T.

Damn people...this is pretty much gettin slept on pretty bad...


..on the other hand...the writing that Chrit had executed came between the lines.

Short poetic scheme made it easier to read an understand the real concept behind it.

The idea made me think too. I mean yeah we have our own role models but they are just people as well..they make mistakes they just happen to be better or just famous. It isnt hard to idolize someone but sometimes obsession can be outtahand. We tend to live actually the life of others and not being much of our own trueself. Its a disease. Thinking that it may hide our own identity. But that doesnt mean it is a bad thing to have someone to look up to as an example. Its just there are limitations.

Simplistic strong terms well compiled as the inner meaning came out of the box.

Chrit is getting really good at concepts of writing...
...Maybe joining those topicals come in handy ;)

^^
Thanks for the breakdown ma