thnks
multi's i cant expliain what i don t know.
longigal is a word meaning of length

O'kay O'kay

Your vocab did seem strong throught this piece and the rhymes were kept quite complicated.. Well Done.. I didn't see no multis in it tho.. Thats a shame, Next time try and incorporate some.. Your flow was okay but did fall in some places.. But wasn't as bad as I thought it was going to be which i anticipated from the structure..The content was good and what you wanted to say on the topic was said and I related to some of that.. The topic was nicely chosen aswell.. All the best if this is going to be put onto audio

Pz..

Holla at mine ...::Mind Over Matter::...

YOUR MESSAGE WAS PRETTY TIGHT. WORK ON THE DELIVERY

THE MESSAGE WAS PRETTY TIGHT, I DON'T HOW IT WOULD SOUND TO A BEAT BUT YOUR SYLLABLE COUNT WAS A LITTLE OFF ON SOME LINES-GOOD POTENTIAL THOUGH

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