Breakdown:

Flow:Frozen
punches:Frozen
structure:Frozen
wordplay:Frozen

One sided battle and Suidal must elavate and read some tutorials or summit, cos he got merked

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uppin y'all for more votes plz vote on this battle............................................ ..............

last time for votes y'all i cant up this thread anymore........................................... ............

suicidal was better here im my opinion, kinda weak battle and both of y'all could elevate abit more.

vote = suicidal

what a herb........multis alone cannot win a battle, elevate first b4 u vote

flow = both
punches = frozen
creativity = frozen
wordplay = frozen
metas = frozen

vote = frozen

frozens verse waz way eazier to read so it waz eazier to get into

so he got my vote he waz betta all round

suicide wasnt to bad but he lost nuff sed

yo can u plzgo n vote on deeze battlez

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frozen wit heat- punches were there... not a bad spit.
your flow was on, and you had a bit of wordplay in there...
overall it was decent spit... i rate you at a 5

suicidal- I think your flow is suicidal, like it took a high dive
into a pool with no water... I could barely peice together a flow,
and you had no hard punches... def. need to elevate some...
but, you's a newb... it aint that bad, but you need to learn what
structure and flow is... go to tutorials.

vote- Frozen

not going to go into detail, but suicide you lost this from structure alone, no one wants to read verse that is as stretched as yours
you had a few nice line but they were hard to read cuz of your fucked up structre, all in all frozen had the better verse, punches didnt hit that hard but they did enuff damage

keep spitten guys and suicide fix your structure dawg
vote=frozen with heat

out dis biatch