oh my bad i forgot to post what you need to know


ya got 2 wins cuz ya battle faggots-
playa?krucial? lyrics, they severely lag it-
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check his sig, he battled playa and kru-cial
they really sucked-- Lyrics they severely lag it


and i know you got rejected to a another rap site-
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check his post history, he wanted to see a crew battle
but the guys didnt want to give him the link.


you're too wack, dont even know how to dap right-
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dap means to respect or thanx its slang, he didnt respect the guys
so they didnt give him the link

Wordplay - Iceman
Punches - Iceman
Personals - Iceman
Flow - Neither were really to on point with the flow
Multis - None
Metas - Iceman
Creativity - Neither
Enjoyment - Iceman

Cold, you need to learn how to integrate multi's and wordplay into your verse. You'll never get votes if all your punches are basic with no wordplay. Multi's help the flow and enjoyability of the read a lot too.

Iceman, you also need to integrate multi's....your structure was nice, but the flow was extremely choppy. I like that you're using wordplay, but almost all your punches were played. Try and be a little more creative next time.

Vote ~ Iceman

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HIT dis and ill return the favor iight
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2

short battle......soljah could have come betta but----
punches=ice......jus harder and clearer
flow=ice.....not bad at all
metas=soljah..more effort
originality=ice
personals=ice...not a lot tho
overall=ice