Thanks a lot dogg, it's appreciated.

How do you nominate it because I also would like too?

nice kid 8/10 word up

Thanks for the feedback

that shit was hot...the whole point of the story was well thought out and it made sence to read all the way through...you kept building it up until the end, which was good...good finishing line, summed it up and left no questions...very good work

keep it up

check out some of my shit "Figure me out" or "Too Easy"

thanks

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Real Nice Homie...
Aint Gonna Get Into All Dese Details...
Good Imagery...
Nice Story Idea...
Nice Work...
Holla....

With a name like Kyle I understand him shotting himself, i seen so many of these "a nerd with a bitch name becoms anger and shots himself", but all around it was tight and kept my attention, nothing creative, since i knew it was going to happen, but interesting and well-done....

Good idea, played but good and you've got madd potential... just work on the art a little bit. Work on your mutlis and finding original ways to get your points acros..