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oli took this wit better structure flow and punches. va try not to put ~ in your flows that is newbie style. other than that u had a good verse but oli's was a lil bit better.
my vote=oli hit this wit a honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8856#post858856 |
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punches............oli
similes/comparisons...........oli flow............both structure............VA vote..........OLI Dogg Please hit this up OLI since u never except my callouts lol, thanks make it honest http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87013 |
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