word... thanks.... since all this shit has been goin on i have been writing like 100X more... but it aint worth the pain that it has caused me. But you have to take the bad with the good i guess.... oh well... thanks for the feedback

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"the witness pain that ive bled, my love is like an open wound
My soul is missing a string, the melody of my life is out of tune"- this stood out to me. I found this line effective an really paced the overall verse... feelin' ya sorrows, but life goes on... good imagry an effort put into this peice... overall 7 an a half outta 10