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yall check out my last battle plzzz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1555#post871555 thanks peace out |
ait here it goes
punches-tie opener-spit closer-tie personals-tie wordplay-dom overal-split yo good ass battle realy realy really close http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5413#post875413 honest vote please |
Begginin:dom
Finish:dom Punchs:dom Volcab:split Structur:dom Wordplay:split Over All:dom Yo check this battle and u post who u think one and shit. Yaz vs Mc-UsKi |
thanks fo honest comments
appreciate it yo dom, no hate intented with that comment that ya shit was weak but I've seen ya doin betta <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< |
Split no problem, I wrote it at college and my friends were tryna get me to hurry up so we could go out to lunch haha..... thats where I thought of the "I just ate you for lunch" line.... anyways yah I didn't need to come out at full force to win I didnt think.... btw one of yourr better verses....
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^^ aight dawg, thanks fo ya honesty man
neva intended any hate so it's all good thanks fo ya comments on mah verse, very much appreciated resp |
Honesty? Well I wasnt saying I think you won lol.... I was just sayin it was one of your better verses but uhh yah
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my vote goes to dominator , over all his shyt was better, split eyes was good but i think dominator had better punches
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wordplay=dom
vocab=split punches=dom metas=non personals=non overall=dom he got this better wordplay split needs to work on setup and make setences small it was wack hollaz |
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Born had a pretty good point with split and his punches...however the verse was annoying as fuck to read with the stretched lines...also flow was extremely choppy....and overall a very inconsistent verse.
dominator came ok....decent punches....flow was aight...wordplay blah...came pretty average just enough to win this battle. Vote=dom |
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