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ohk i aint gonna freepost anymore........................
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alright...i hope all this freeposting is done....and what the heck is up with it? roxay, if you do die....well...sucks to be you....uppin (2).....couple more votes
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alright alright.....uppin this for the 3rd time....lets get some feedback and tell us what you thought about this.....i thought it was pretty good for a noob battle....post a link and i'll hit that up too...PEACE
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uppin (4).....come on ya'll...we get three votes and then you quit...let's go....vote and drop a link....peace
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Aight.... 1st off... y'all both had a decent verse. I'll give ya that. But yaz sum of ur barz were kinda off and didnt rhyme. But thats all good. Now for poetic.... u did tha same thing but ur punches landed harder. Tha flow was a bit better and u had nice meta's and wordlpay. Honest Opinion and Vote.
VOTE: POETICTENDENCEEZ |
punches=poet
consistency=poet original=no1 metas=no1 setup=poet overall=poet he came nicer even though it wasn't that hot no personals or nuttin but he came nicer hollaz |
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