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yo overall i would give it 8 outof 10 plainly beacuse it flowed and stayed on the same subject mostly it was a easy and nice peice to read.......
as said above tho i did like the 1st verse...... |
FOr Starting, This Was Nice.. I Seen
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Thanks for the feedback people..
Much appriciated... |
Hit Up These Since I Took The Time To Hit Up Yours
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i liked it, it was hot at first, then it just cooled down
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