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Sup,I can't vote yet but I was definately feelin thorn's verse, goo use of vo-cab, there should always be more vo-cab,vo-cab is good.

Peace.

vote on my battle Legin Vs Jai Blaize @ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89429

That was a good battle and you both ripped it with flow. Other than that, Thorn ripped it with content. He came from every angle with punches and came up with some pretty original and good shit. Deva, it seems like you were just feeding off of his battle and reversing the shit to him. There were still good punches and style on your part, but Thorn ripped this one with a better verse overall. No hate....

Hit this shit up if you get the chance...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88479

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Thorn
Slower Than Snails, You couldnt Do this Blind Feeling Brail
Your Dilvery's So Slow It's Practically Post Office Mail
^^^^ Kinda Gay But Okay

Hail To This Crown, I'll Drown Ya Mind Like Surround Sound
Profound Spits Will Pound This Clit, Ya lost Like Homeward Bound
^^^^ Decent

About to Encounter a Loss Like Teen Abortion Occurance
This Deva makes me Sicker than No Health Insurance
^^^^ Good (the abortion part)

Blockin ya Spits like Shower Curtains And Dams Made by Beavers
I got this battle Hands Down Like School class Under Achievers
^^^ That Doesent Even Rhyme

Sniff Coke cuz you Blow, Gettin Rid of u Faster than Tickets Front Row
Like Pimps Arguein wit Prostitutes Im gettin Tired of Battlin this Hoe
^^^^^^^^^ 2nd Line Is A Killer!~

I wont Win this in a Rude Manner, Ya lines aint Fat so I wont Stare
Witnessing you lose is Expected Kid, Like Dykes with Short Hair
^^^^^LMAO I Like It When PPL Diss Dikes

Block Ya Shots Like Bullet Proof Lead, Ur dead like Undecover Feds
Its Said, You Suck like Teeth Scraping and Given some Bad Head
^^ Good Multis

U'll Fail, Like Sluts Taking Sexualy Transmitted Disease Tests
Me and Deva wouldnt Read the Same if this was a Case of Incest
^^^ How Much Times U Gonna Rhyme About Sluts And Sex?

With In this Fake Deva Bitch Is more Shit than Popped Zits
Ya Lines are Fertalizer, thats Why Your Interests are Good Shit (Profile) ^^^^^ You Did Your Re-Search!

Your 23 On RB, Ya More Pathetic than Guys Using Sex Toys
Girl U cant win this Game, Its like Musical Chairs With Hemroids
^^^^^
NICE FINISHER

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Deva

The First thing a bring is I used to work for british mail,//
I got the fastest delivery for beating thorn the fucking snail//
^^ That Dont Make Sense

Secondly I suggest you learn to read brail, I already did//
To read in between the lines “gonna break this wooden kid"//
(thorns r made of wood)
^^^^ BLAH I DONT WANNA READ ANYMORE

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punches - thorn
flow- both
metas- thorn
vocab - tie
overall- thorn
my vote - thorn

punch/thor
/wordplay thor
struc/thorn
voc/tie
injoyment/thor
multi/both
creative/thorn

vote/thor

man thor had some nice shit it flows well to his mind
as for deva seemed 2 copy yer stlye and messed the flow up
deva you have some nice voc
but be original
holla at this honest votes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87338
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89509
holla