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Philo 11-12-03 01:09 AM

this was an embarrasment... cutastrophe easily lost this battle.
I understand why wang didn't explain... its not needed.
Your punches were unoriginalk and the wordplay sucked... grade 3's can come up with that shit. And please don't explain the punches in brackets after the line... if it's that important then do it at the end of the verse... all you had in this verse was multi's with shitty punches.
..they let you in a crew????

Anyway.
Teck.
That was the cheesiest opener that ended in the most lack-lustre punch I've ever seen. Fuckin horrible man. second punch worked..actually nice...would've been cool to see something personal tied in there though...
verse was marginal after that, closer..meh. not bad. but same idea with the brackets after the line, takes away all the effect.

Teck won this because he tried to be more original than cut adn he actually tried to punch, even if he missed a few he came closer definately.
also...cut... try to make your verse more readable, then asthetically it's more pleasing and better to read and understand.

vote- teck

Philo 11-12-03 01:11 AM

k..so i can't poll...don't have 100 posts, but i'm more worthy than any others....
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good for you then cutastrophe.

The Wang 11-12-03 01:17 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by cutastraphe
u'r fuckin wackkkkkkkkkkkkkkk ya have to have explanation vote this is a crew battle. and ya alredy polled for him? wtf ya just hatin on me so stop it befo i merk ya ass too. explain ya vote otherwise we takin ya poll away.



............if you have to explain every fuckin line you spit.....then obviously there is something wrong............

cutastraphe 11-12-03 01:31 AM

oh wutevaaaaaaa shut the fuck up so i didn't put my explanations on the bottom and it fucked up the whole structure of the flow-----and i didn't explain every line but just where it needed it--wang ya still have to break the shit down but fuck that ya vote dun't count ya lost ya chance to explain shit. Atleast that nigga philo explained ish whoev the fuck that herb is i kno we both spit bad verses here and i wuldn't care if u did have enuff posts to poll philo---atleast ya dropped an honest vote---fuck all the jibber jabber--uppin and one kid still didn't poll----uppinnnn

The Wang 11-12-03 01:33 AM

^^^^ LOL your a fag.......arent you??????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????.......................

cutastraphe 11-12-03 01:36 AM

Quote:
^^^^ LOL your a fag.......arent you??????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????.......................
typical response from a kid name the wang--------haaaaa

SmokaJoka. 11-12-03 02:08 AM

damn close battle here i gotta say....u both were pretty much equal with punches and metas....tech had a better flow...and u both had an equal vocab....here's a breakdown for u two...

BREAKDOWN
Multis - Cut
Metas - Tie
RhymeScheme - Tech
Structure - Tech
Punches - Tie
Creativity - Cut
Vocab - Tie
Overall - i gotta say that Tech only got this mostly because of the style he used in his verse (rhymescheme) no hate to u cut..u had some dope lines...but some chopped up barz...feel me....but i think this was a pretty dope battle with u two....

peace
4:20

The Wang 11-12-03 02:18 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by cutastraphe
typical response from a kid name the wang--------haaaaa



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.::Narcotics::. 11-12-03 02:32 AM

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fora honest votes............................................. ...............

BlUnT-MC 11-12-03 01:01 PM

Teck killed this on da real, way more structure an' flow... better punches fo-real too...

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.::Narcotics::. 11-12-03 05:15 PM

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Infinite Skillz 11-12-03 05:33 PM

Honestly I think Teck Nine won due to his punches hittin harda. Both verses were good, but Teck's punches inched out a win for him in my opinion.

vote=TECK NINE

Vote on this honestly:

Infinite Skillz vs. Nitemarre-
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91269

.::Narcotics::. 11-13-03 12:00 AM

uppin to get this closed............forealllllllllllllllllllllllllll lllllll
fuk red dragon............................................ ....fuk that fagat....

.::Narcotics::. 11-13-03 06:30 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Mic KIng
uppin to get this closed............forealllllllllllllllllllllllllll lllllll
fuk red an Cut they are both bitches

.::Narcotics::. 11-14-03 12:29 AM

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