aight...check it....Angell had the punches and personals....which is what got this battle.....ur structure is kinda rough..but other than that...pretty good....and names...u had a nice flow and structure...u got the basic idea....only prob is u had weak punches.....and u need to up ur vocabulary some....this was a good read from u both....but like i said in the beginning Angell got this with punches and personals....no hate...just a vote....

peace
4:20

alright then
well give him the last vote so this can be closed
and then ill battle someone else
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this needs to be closed someone
id do the same if i could vote
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i dont even no what 2 say no more
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Angel beat that fagat that Freeposts in my thread..thinks its funny....fukin idiot..
angel killed this newb an his weak ass played metaphorical rhymes
V- Angel