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dat was hot man. hit mine up drop a honest opinion

Nice concept and vocabulary. Couldn't really put the flow with a beat, but overall some good shit.

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nic eshit man good flow

It was a Nice piece, the flow fell off to me at some times. But you know how when your the one saying it, it sounds better. So I expect alot on this one. Good vocab, good subject and all. Like young smiff said, good opinion. Raps arnt shit unless your sptten what yout hink is the truth. So nice work, I liked it alot. Everyone, go peep my flow, it is in open mice. It is 1 verse, im tryin to see if I should make a whole rap out of it. and thanks for the feedback wogzta...

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

^ no prob.... and thanks for the feedback

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Yo whats up, im gonna tell ya straight up whats cool wit it and whats wrong so dont hate dont hate.. dont.. dont.. dont hate :)
it was a great piece, good concept, stayed on topic. though what could be worked on is the actual flow i found it fallin off at some points of the piece but other than constant flow.. it was hot drop.. goodjob and plz redo the fav and drop some feedback on oone of my drops (any in my sig)

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... is upping!!