uppin(2).......................................... .................................................. ............................pz

lets get them votes in......
can sum 1 please vote for me lmfao
i need to stop losing
and stop battlin people with 10+ win ecords

u cnt ask pll 2 vote 4 u man.lol........................................... .................................................. ........pz

dog had better punches therfore he won in my opinion close battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1723#post911723

they aint gonna obviosly..just a joke..hmm people is sleepin. lets just get these votes

GLOKK STARZZ

ite uppin(3)cmon...................................... .................................................. ..........pz

OLI obviously won this.
he didnt kill the other kid, just slightly better in everything...

yo OLI please give your input into these...thanks dogg...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=91956

actually just the second one, i just one the battle thats the first link...thanks dogg please take a look its getting mad slept on......................

so depressed afta battling he drank a bottle of takeelar?
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wtf is takeelar, dont u mean takila, or how ever the fuck its spelled
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oli dogg^
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yer more hated than the forces & the pigs
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wtf was that?^
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plus yer a fake ass pamelas tits & bald people wearing wigs
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sorry man not feeling it^
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mista raedar 2 be honest yer more like masta bates
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again with using his name, not a very good diss anyways
people jerk off all the time, who gives a fuck?
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who the fuck is mr. kipling?
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penoltemet bar?
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i dont no man i saw a lot of wackness 2 this flow
ive seen way better shit from u
its like u didnt even consider that someone would break it down
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the rest of the flow i didnt mention was decent
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let me break down that other fools verse
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wateva man .................................................. .................................................. ..............................pz

uppin(4)cmon...................................... .................................................. ........................................pz

Dogg had better punches and creativity...Thats why he won in my opinion....

Vote on my battle against el veteranO....Thnx

the dog patrols here & im about 2 take oli dog 2 the dog pound
you just a retired circus intertainer like krusty the clown
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that made more sense than talking bout pigs^
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oli dont want it with me under water, cuz im known 2 blast seashells
i'm like a hotter form of fire, because i pack more heat then hell
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dont use his name 2 times, well better than comparing someone 2 a cake^
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i'm like spider man, because i sense bad rapppers
i clap wack mc's so u can just call me the oli clapper
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again with his name, decent lines though
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if u blew off my arms i still aint losing my touch
you like a little kid, to win it aint taking much
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decent, but aint is not a word? 2nd line dont make sense
y u saying that he is a little kid and its not taking him much 2 win?
think about it
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u like a plain noun, yer name dont deserve a capitol letter
i knew this kid was wack as soon as i met her
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decent, but dont use kid twice, instead of u like, say your like
u need to fix yer sructure and come much more harder
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oh yeah whats up with oli dogg using those *____*?
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vote/mista raedar for now
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look for my battles
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OPener: DOGG
Closer: Raed
Punches: DOGG
Personals: DOGG
Flow: Raed
Winner: DOGG...................................